This is what we had to do in literacy we had to write something bad we did. I gave my dog my dinner and my dog didn't like it and mum hates me feeding the dog and me and my sister painted my mum's car bright pink witch the car was white.
Monday, March 2, 2020
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This is what we had to do in literacy we had to write something bad we did. I gave my dog my dinner and my dog didn't like it and mum hates me feeding the dog and me and my sister painted my mum's car bright pink witch the car was white.
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Hi Macy, I like both of your poems, they all follow the same sort of scheme, my most favourite poem that you did is the top one because how you made a 3 year old innocent. Next time you could make a sudden plot twist to your poem.
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